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Old 04-16-20, 10:01 AM   #1
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I think I am writing the end of my fourth book. Spoiler Alert: She dies in the end . . .
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Noideaof1~ May I suggest something, I hope you don't mind. I'm thinking, she almost dies at the end & there's a "light at the end of the tunnel" in a very unexpected way/individual. What do you think?
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My books are written like an autobiography through poetry and random thoughts. I am the main character, I don't know how this will end but I am struggling for a better outcome.
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My books are written like an autobiography through poetry and random thoughts. I am the main character, I don't know how this will end but I am struggling for a better outcome.
I think it's your choice/decision for that better/best outcome. You're extremely gifted writer, so you know you can "ponder" something & see how it "fits into" what you want. Like I said before, just my thinking. :)
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