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Old 02-13-13, 02:14 PM   #1
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You are not alone today,
I am with you as I write.
Just hear me out for one last thing,
I know it will all be all right.

If you feel like nobody cares anymore,
And the world would be a better place,
I wish I could mend your heart that has tore
And wipe each tear from your face.

Although I may not know you,
Even though I wish I do
Iíd place my love in an envelope,
And mail it straight to you.

You are perfect in every way.
I love you just the way you are.
A world without you there each day,
Is like losing the brightest star.

Thereís more to life, more things to live for,
I know itís hard to believe.
But donít go so soon, before your time
I do not want you to leave.

I couldnít bear for you to miss it all
Please remember me each night.
Remember me each morning too,
I swear it will all be all right.
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Old 02-13-13, 03:47 PM   #2
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I really like this poem. it's wonderful :)
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Old 02-15-13, 07:11 AM   #3
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That is amazing so beautiful. Thank you so much for that. It gave me tears. Incredible.
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Old 02-15-13, 08:44 PM   #4
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beautifull poem
it could be the lyrics of a song i sang them while playing guitar
it it is really really good
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Old 05-28-13, 09:28 PM   #5
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I was considering suicide and then i read this and I'm crying so hard it's so beautiful. thank you so much.
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I hope this stays near the top of the forums for a long time.
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This poem was very moving.
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Old 11-28-13, 06:21 PM   #8
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Alright, who's been cutting onions!? :'(

After reading this I feel a little better, having one of them really bad nights
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Old 02-08-14, 04:14 AM   #9
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I like it. Beautiful poem.
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Old 02-17-14, 04:40 PM   #10
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So beautiful. You are a true artist with words.
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