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Old 08-05-15, 04:25 AM   #1
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"It's starting to snow." I said. We stopped and sat on a large piece of granite, admiring the dense forest and foggy overcast bringing in the cold front. Silence. All throughout the forest. The wind brought a sharp, icy gust of wind at our faces. My nose started to sting and mucus was trickling out. I hurriedly tried to wipe it off because I didn't want to embarrass myself infront of her. She didn't mind though. She never did quite care for reality. As long as she was with me, she was happy, joyous, ecstatic. People said I brought out a side of her that they never knew existed, even her mother said she didnít have a care in the world as long as she was with me. I saw how much she loved nature. Her large, observant eyes scanned the tops of pine and oak trees. She was finally at ease. A nice, somewhat calming layer of snow stretched across the land. I felt her grip my arm tighter and bury her face in my neck. Her icy nose met my neck and sent goosebumps throughout my body. I realized that I truly was what she wanted, forever. After everything, we still managed to stay together and never separate. She needs me. She would fall apart without me, as would I if her presence was absent in my life. The snapping of a twig brought us both back to reality, where we wish we werenít.
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That's beautifully written the words are very moving
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Beautiful

"She never did care for reality"....I loved that.

Hang on to her mate - you make her sound perfect.

They say a picture is worth a thousand words. You had about 200 that were better than any picture. I'd give up 1000 souls for that kind of happiness....
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