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Old 05-27-10, 03:09 PM   #1
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I can not post this in the depression poetry forum, because it is not about an individuals struggle or mine, but about how our peoples kindness and determination can give someone else hope and light in the darkest times.

~This is for you
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Heres my heart
you need it more
the love for you
ease your pain, I am sure

Heres my shirt
when you are cold
I'll suffer for a while
my warmth for you to hold

Heres my last dollar
I give to you for food
I'll be there for you
for just a while, things to do.

Heres that present
you never got
took me weeks to find
your smile, is all I sought

Heres my shoulder
for your cold tears shed
eat up my happiness
while I find more to be feed

Heres that kidney
you need to merely live
I have an extra
for you I will surely give

Heres my mind
I hope you learn
more thoughts to be complete
on your quest still yern

Here is my wing
Im sorry the other was broken
So long, so much pain ago
this one sturdy with fight be woken

Here is my life now
nothing more in sight
I am ok with this
it was my purpose in life.
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Old 05-27-10, 03:26 PM   #2
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I have no words...

I never do anyway....

This is beautiful BW.... beautiful isn't the word to be honest...Its more than beautiful.....

I wish I could say more...because this poem, your words, emotions deserve more...much much more...

With all my heart, " thank you " BW

Love Joanna

( I'm sure you know how I feel anyway... )
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my broken angel..Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the little voice at the end of the day that says I'll try again tomorrow.


((((((((((((((((((((huugggs))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))0

thanks for such beautiful gift..
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You beautiful soul Broken Wings - this made me feel so humble - your gift to everyone is priceless. Thank you for giving so much...............................xx
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wow, that was beautiful bw
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It had to be exhumed. Lovely poem.

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