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Old 05-26-13, 02:21 PM   #1
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I have fought
I have fought
I have fought you

and you have won

white spray
closing
over islands
lashes
of the sea

sand burns
under the weight
of elephants

a man
that has waited
all his life
to find love
finds he is
too old
to continue

she forbids

not a word
not a single word.
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Old 06-03-13, 12:46 AM   #2
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This is amazing!
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Old 02-26-14, 05:09 PM   #3
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Wow! I keep coming back to this.
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Old 03-07-14, 07:31 PM   #4
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Thank you ShinigamiMachine and nanobelle. Glad you liked it - means a lot you guys!
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