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Old 12-02-10, 03:40 PM   #1
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So, I was going through some boxes (that I haven't gone through for a LONG time) and found an old "song" me and a friend wrote a long time ago...
We were both going through difficult times...


"Keeping thoughts
Telling Lies
There's something in the darkness
The center of your eyes

And if we could fly
Would we fly through time
And would we ever find a reason
A glimpse as to why

Drop, drop, break, break
I'll refuse to be your mistake
Hearts, heart, ache, aches
How much red will fill a lake

Nasty bruises
Left on knees
Giving birth to something
Something like misery

It's not her place
It's not your place
No one can take away
The image of your face

Drop, drop, break, break
I'll refuse to be your mistake
Hearts, heart, ache, aches
How much red will fill a lake"
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