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Old 11-21-08, 04:06 AM   #1
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i wrote this poem it is called untitled because it speaks to people in differnt ways.



Forest gump once said "life is like a box of chocolates you never know what your gonna get" i have to disagree, Life is like a Match.

If you dont use your life it will wither away and burn and be USELESS.
So take life and light it up, light the candle to guide your way so you can see the truth of what lies ahead and change the world one candle at a time starting with your own.


lately iv been writing a lot of poems.

so what do you guys think. and by the way this is COPYRIGHTED lol:p
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very nice indeed.
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personally i think life is like fire...
coz its beautiful... yet powerful...a single rouge fire can send acres burning...its very distuctive is misused...yet all fires are destined to burn out eventually...and can burn out sooner if put out...or run out of things to burn/fuel etc both fire and humans need oxygen and fuel to survie
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