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Old 04-16-20, 07:45 AM   #1
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The silence in the dark is painful
The silence in the day kills
None of my thoughts are gainful
Nothing before me but hills

I'm dieing in my mind
But still my body goes on
I'm hurting - not fine
These smiles are just a con

I'm not really okay
These secrets weigh a ton
I may not make it through today
The tears . . . they just run
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Old 04-16-20, 09:50 AM   #2
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Noideaof1~ Another one, that catches my attention. Your writing is from the heart & soul.
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Old 07-13-20, 10:10 AM   #3
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This is super cool!
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