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Old 10-19-07, 07:25 PM   #1
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Every now and then,
Imay try to hurt you,
Just to see you cry!

Try to make you feel,
The pain
That i felt,
Causing me to go insane.

You can't say I didn't try,
'Cuz many night i sat and cried!

With all those tears i let fall,
I have slowly started building my wall!

Everything that you have done to me
Has made you my enemy

My wall was built
To block the guilt

This wall wasn't put up a second to soon,
My wall was built so it can block out you!!!
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Old 10-20-07, 11:43 AM   #2
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i guess we all have walls we use to block others out or to hide something within or whatever. walls aint always good



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Old 10-25-07, 04:53 PM   #3
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I have a wall that I build up when I get angry. I don't let it out.
This was really what its like to close off of people.
I liked this poem. I have a wall now actually.
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Old 11-19-07, 01:59 AM   #4
 
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Default Distorted...sometimes the walls that we build not only block

out others...but also block us off from any means of escape/rescue.

Invisible walls are the hardest to find ones way around...

And sadly, the ones that we create them for...to guard us from harm...know how to shout through them with their forked tongues inflicting new pain...behind those invisible bars that we thought would keep us safe...

not caged in.


Love the poem...just wanted to pass on that walls like these should never be built...
for protection...

because they inadvertently imprison the innocents...seeking protection.
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