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Old 12-18-06, 08:56 PM   #1
 
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-Kill Me-

Over and over you break me harder each time
What am I to do?
I give you all that I can
Never is it enough
Kill me with your friendship
Kill me with your friendship of lies
All alone I sit and cry
Never will there be a day the bloody tears dont fall
Push me to the edge
It's not hard to do
If I fall will I think of you?
Kill me with your promises
Kill me with your broken promises
Say you care
It will be ok
Tell me more about your hope for me
Sorry if I don't believe your words
You're always a little too late
Kill me with your dreams
Kill me with your dreams of nightmares
Maybe someday it would of been ok
I'll never be here for that day
I'll die by my own hand
The sun sets on this lie
The moon raises to watch the final good-bye
Kill me with your laughter
Kill me with your mocking laughter
You could of said anything
You should of said something
You would of said the right thing
Kill me with your silence
Kill me with your silent love
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Old 12-18-06, 08:58 PM   #2
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DA, it's so sad. You truly have a beautiful way of expressing yourself through your poems.

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Thank you Aries. my poems are my way of expressing pain I guess. crying when I cant cry. saying what I cant say. lol I dont know....
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Another great poem DA!
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Old 12-18-06, 10:01 PM   #5
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I know what you mean DA. Broken promises,lies, it all sucks. But this is a good poem. alot of good imagery. I like this one esp.

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The sun sets on this lie
The moon raises to watch the final good-bye
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Thanks Beautifullysuicidal! :)

Thank you Tigs. ....and it does ALL suck!!!!!!! :x
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wow - "kill me" as the theme of this was awesome. very nice DA!!
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Thank you Irish. :D
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