this relationship ended filled to the brim with pills
the pain killer kills the pain injested when we were still talking
took intrest in you and you an intrest to my rhyming
as im writeing this i wish i never took a damn likeing
remember fighting for you but now im broken and dieing
woken up thinking i would kill for you, more savage then the mayans
now im smokein with my friends, tokein the marijuana resin
resurected a pesant from the pleasant life, a hard lesson
im second guessin what love is cause you i fell in love with
a fucking dumb bitch that gave me a chance but then blew it
i knew it, you caught me off gaurd, now pay the dues kid
i burnt a new bridge, damn kid youre really Lurid
this lifes to lucid so off to the dreams where im abusive
my lifes diluted, i aint congruent im contusive
a lost kid cruisin threw life as if a boss did
a hostage, my bloods toxic and spits caustic

This is beautiful. I love your style - it's so raw and real. This is the kinda stuff I listen to on my iPod, no joke. I love this stuff, and I wish I had the talent to write it as well as you do.

ive only been writeing for bout 3 years now, you could do it if you wanted to :)