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Old 06-08-11, 04:04 AM   #1
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pick the mic up & shove the drugs aside
cant cop a 9-5 so threw hip hop stay alive
completed hundred bar cyphers, im a lifer in this prison
im escapeing threw these writtens, its a given keys are missin
father teidiously misses me, dont front the love it's misery
invert this verse to understand, fathom life threw victory
anguish translated to english but can i finish this
i question my ability, this trait, my fate, lets vanquish
make bangers collabing with strangers, unheard dangers
i came here as a failure but promise y'all i'll be heard
rhyme obsurd, the cause is hate, the ends some sketched on crumpled paper
turn the bowl to vapour absorb the smoke, indulge the flavour
hate with passion, ration love, hit some bumps then tracked the mud
above your hell but crashed in rocks, shattered thoughts but aint corrupt
copped 2 shots so if i miss can reminisce then suicide
fallen angels lost they pride, high & buzzed so qualified
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Old 06-08-11, 09:44 AM   #2
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Wow. This is really good. I can imagine a beat in the background. This kills Lil' Wayne and there's no profanity and a clear, strong message.
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