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Old 04-06-10, 07:13 PM   #1
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I was sitting here bored and thought I'd write some stuff down from my heart, I decided to try and shape them into a couple of poems. I've never been great at creative stuff but I felt like it was good to get stuff off my chest and to share it.

Hope you don't mind me posting these. One is about the girl I have fallen in Love with and the other is about my Mom who passed away earlier this year.

Mom

Every moment I think of you
The memories we had, just a few,
Your in my dreams all the time
I wish one day your hand will touch mine.

I look at a photo and begin to cry
The time we had together, passed by,
My life without you involves a gap
To reconnect with you, I don't need a map.

I wake up each day hoping you'll be there
Just one more time, I'd like to see your stare,
I hope you knew what you meant to me
Trying my best, to become what you wanted me to be.

Since you were taken away my mind has been muddled
I dream, just one more time for you to have me cuddled,
I'll take care of Dad, the man you affectionately called Tom
You were a wonderful person, love you Mom.

In Love

Your smile as powerful as the sun
Your eyes as radiant as they come,
Your hair so silky and full of shine
I see your face and dream you could be mine.

Your voice is like music to my ears
Your caring nature should bring you no fears,
Your skin so soft, you couldn't shine more
I just want to cuddle you and make you feel secure.

Your confidence will grow, you think you lack
Your reflection in the mirror, a beautiful girl staring back,
Your beauty so glaring, it's equalled by few
I dream that one day I could be with you.

As I said these are the first one's I've done and are probably the closest things to my heart right now.

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Old 04-07-10, 06:38 AM   #2
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Truely Beautiful. i will never forget these
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