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Old 11-21-14, 07:44 PM   #1
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From the very first day we met,
Exponentially this love grew.
It's just the beginning of this journey,
And I already love the hell out of you.

Since the day I fell oh so hard,
My search for the one is through.
Now you're my whole world,
Gosh I love the hell out of you.

You're just so beautiful,
So smart and funny too.
You only give me one choice,
Just to love the hell out of you.

You're more than I've ever wanted,
There's nothing you can't do.
All that do for me each day,
I just love the hell out of you.

Years from now when we're old and gray,
It'll be like our love is brand new.
As I have done all this time,
I'll forever love the hell out of you.

Even when my time has come,
And when my last breaths are few.
I pray that my dying words be,
"I've always loved the hell out of you."
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Old 11-28-14, 07:18 AM   #2
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nice. i love the way this poem sounds fresh after the similar last sentences. it is full of no doubts and i am glad for you(yes, i feel happy for others even amidst clinical depression!)
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