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Old 02-23-16, 07:49 AM   #21
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"Love"

To feel love is something we all yearn for
May it be short or fake
dull or annoying
The feeling will be there
Even if we're just a passer by
Or they were the passer by
Love is something very vague
Every single one who felt it defines it uniquely in there own
I love you
is only three simple words
Yet means so much to others
or means nothing to some
Yet not only in words we say "I love you"
It comes in different forms




i have no idea how to end this... ahaha and continue it :DDDDDDD
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Old 05-06-17, 10:24 AM   #22
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A Sickness
Is it a Sickness?
Where you can't climb out of this darkness?
When you've seen the light
Yet...
And yet you're back into this abyss
Just like an instance
The light has disappeared once again

Me
Can't I escape this damned hole?!
I don't want to be here...
but it's a place to familiar
Leaving for too long seems...
Wrong... almost
Like you should belong in this damn shithole
Crying only drags me deeper
I'm losing hope to be free from this place




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Old 05-12-17, 11:00 AM   #23
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Sometimes... you just fall apart, without any reason. Only thoughts from past events, that some how crept in your head again.
One moment, everything's well.
Suddenly, you're on the ground. Crying. Screaming.
The world around you spins into a blur,
where everything you do seems like a distant memory...
Soon it's over, like you've woken from a nightmare...
but... you never woke up, you only calmed down, bleak thoughts at most times. If you're lucky.
You prepare yourself, thinking of the worst to never be surprised...
Yet, it only sets you into a frenzy of panic, fear, and lost
Is this what paranoia is?
The need to be there for someone, to make sure there still here
Cherishing every moment you spend with them, like it was the last
Trying to make sure their happy, when you're losing yourself

How do I stop?
I try to be emotionless, it only bought pain to those around
Happy thoughts, yet the pessimist in me surface more than I can prevent
Why can't I just accept the good things happen and bad things can't be avoided?
Will I ever be able to set these thoughts aside?
Bury them, and they'll never climb out ever again?

A weak mind can only take so much thoughts
How did I manage to do it before?
When everyone thought I was some tough, capable, emotionless person
Now, everyone worries about me. A smile they easily see through the thin mask, I proudly thought no one would notice.
How foolish of me.
Their afraid to help.
I only make things worse if they try,
only pain, anger and confusion are set in motion
From the short temper I have
Nothing ever goes well

So they leave it alone
Hoping things would be okay.
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Old 09-19-17, 11:30 AM   #24
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Short story:

The cold breeze of the city gave me chills, I held tighter to you as we watched the stars shimmer on the ground. You held my face, leaning closer to me, my heart pounded harder seeing you smile.

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I knew time wasn't our friend. As the seconds passed by, I held onto you cherishing the moment and dreading home. A bittersweet moment, you giggled knowing how much confusion I was in. You enjoyed seeing me like this. I don't blame you. I'm a broken man with broken dreams. You leach on men like me, but you don't know me. I see the good in you, but I can never be with you. Your kindness draws me to you, not your face or your body. A woman with a pure soul, caring for those who are around you, giving your all just for the sake of your family. Knowing someone like you exist makes me glad to be a live, but I am bounded to responsibility and contracts.



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Old 09-19-17, 11:45 AM   #25
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i am into poetry sometimes...not poetry in the real sense...
but just simple words out of my way of pensive thinking..
i wrote this a while ago..does it make sense??

I found a box of words today
In a corner of my mind
I think my brain tucked them away
In a place I'd never find

The box was black and dusty
Full of words I rarely use
I think my brain had hid them
While I suffered from the blues

Words like "hate" and "prejudice"
Words that hurt and maim
I didn't know the box was there
Now, I've found it just the same

Now, what to do with this old box
And the words that are inside
These are true words of avoidance
Words I guess I thought had died

I don't know what just made me
Go into this corner of my head
I must have eaten Mexican
Before I went to bed

But, now I have a box of words
I can not use or sell
And some I see are pretty bad
So, I guess it's just as well

I'll put the box away again
And I'll hide it in my brain
And I'll keep these dark words buried
For to use them is insane...
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I get it, tiger poetry is a way of writing with feelings, or expressive way (I think ) I think the title of the thread would have fitted better as "lil poetries" ahaha

I like your piece maybe I should also bury my box before I'm sent to the asylum
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Old 09-19-17, 02:38 PM   #27
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I get it, tiger poetry is a way of writing with feelings, or expressive way (I think ) I think the title of the thread would have fitted better as "lil poetries" ahaha

I like your piece maybe I should also bury my box before I'm sent to the asylum

your poetry is worthwhile reading,Penguinlord...
i often get pensive..and then i can express my feelings better..
I see you're from Asia..I have travelled a lot in that continent...


another one of my writings...

how wonderful it is....feeling alive,think,feel,absorb..
music suits my brain...it's the nectar i need right now..
like the honeybee who serves the queen hiding up in the nest cocoon
it's the honey that counts...will i get lost and lose myself?
in a labyrinth of thoughts i wanna think about..
is my joy maybe a mask of sorrow..looking for the ultimate answer?
if a question mark is answered with another question mark..it stays unsolved..
sorrow and joy exist together..what's the use of pity for myself?
i often wonder if someones life and fate..is just looking for sheer contentment
life is a pleasure or a shattered dream..a knife has a sharp end which cuts..
despair,self pity should never exist in a heart that tells me..
it's gonna be allright..patience is a virtue...something to treasure deep within..
fight life as it is..as it comes in the little silly things in life..
very often we set our goal too high...and we lose our spirit...in shattered dreams...
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Thank you For me, I tend to write more when I feel intense emotions, sometime it's good but more often it's bad. Now I just feel fine, so it'll probably be a while before I post again ahaha
where have you traveled in Asia?

I love your poems, it's also worthwhile to read
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Asia==I travelled through Turkey,Iran,Afghanistan,Pakistan,India,Bangladesh,
Thailand,Malaysia,Sri Lanka,Singapore,Japan
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I wrote haiku's at times a while ago...

*in my summer heart..
when everybody smiles..
i forget about despair..
life is a circle of joy*

*sudden gentle breeze
flower kisses the water
whispering love talk*


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