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Old 08-02-06, 05:55 PM   #1
 
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The Train

It was 4 am again and steven heard the call. He had been hearing the call for years now but finely knew what it was. He knew what he had to do. It was time to get his stuff together. steven got out of bed and put on his favorite clothing. He went to the kitchen and made himself his favorite breakfast. He eats slowly savoring every morsel. After breakfast he goes to his car most of the stuff he needs is already there. Steven stops and thinks to himself “ what else do I need?
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Old 08-04-06, 02:54 PM   #2
 
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Default I noticed similarities....

As usual on this site, I notice things common with others....

This section seems to get fewer posts & replies, possibly because it is at the bottom of the screen.

I'll watch for more.

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Old 08-08-06, 05:10 PM   #3
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this was great! sad, but great! is this story true? you don't plan on doing this do you?
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the story is not true. its one of many posibilitys for me
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well i'm glas to hear you are okay! don't let this be the way you leave this earth! God has chosen times for us and when he takes you, you won't even know! you won't feel a thing!
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Old 08-15-06, 06:30 PM   #6
 
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Default You jumped into a different car...on the TRAIN...

We all call "Depression!" Please try NOT to jump into any other cars...

Look...before you leap...

On board the caboose...or the Bullet Train...

That Leads to "Nowhere!
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now i know why you keep all that stuff in your car :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :x :x :x :x :x
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Old 10-31-06, 03:27 AM   #8
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i wish i have a gun....
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