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Old 10-16-11, 02:18 PM   #1
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Perfect summary of myself and my life.

I am a piece of shit that's being flushed down the toilet. Yes. A piece of shit that goes around and around in toilet bowl. Each round I go, I see things I could have changed, but never did. I go around and around with regret, and each time, I pass by, thinking "Ohh, I could of done something about that." but I never do. Just go around and around and around, and each time, it gets faster. Time speeds as you get older. A piece of shit in the toilet. Around and around, things are still the same. Things do not change in this toilet called life. Soon enough, I'll be at the center, and down the drain I go. That's the end of this life. All it's ever been was just a simple piece of shit being flushed. That's me.
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wow..thats harsh, i look back on things and think i coulda shouda wouda, but thats doesnt help me, only makes me worse, are u on medication to help with the way you feel about your self and life?
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"Some people try to forget, take the memories and just delete them, but I keep them as a reminder that they're not killing me, and I thank God for teaching me humility."

There's nothing you can do about the past. You can try to hide them, or you can learn what you can from your mistakes, take life one day at a time, and make sure that you don't repeat them.
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Excellent analogy, wish I thought of it.
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Sirius, it was like reading EXACTLY how my life has been, for my entire life!! Thank you for posting such a great piece.
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