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Old 03-31-15, 03:35 PM   #1
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Death sits in a chair, across from me, and watches.
Death sees, but has no eyes.

Death knows but has no mind. We often sit together in the night.

Death has one move left. I have none.


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Old 03-31-15, 03:39 PM   #2
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What a beautiful, yet tragic poem...

Death is like a friend who shares no friendship

An escape to which there is no light at the end of the tunnel..

So I understand completely...
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Old 09-01-15, 11:33 PM   #3
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Wow. That is amazing. This is exactly how i feel right now, but worded much better than id have said. Ive been having trouble collecting my thoughts. I used to write things like this all the time to express my feelings, but now i find that im too consumed with anger.. There more to it but ya know. Probably couldnt even find the words to explain.

This definately touches me. I know this isnt the right forum to talk about suicide, but ive had the overwhelming knowledge in my mind that i dont have a choice any more. There is not another option. I guess thats why im here... I dont have anyone to talk to.
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