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Old 09-02-15, 04:33 AM   #1
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Where are you?

You are the bright star in my sky.
You keep me following your light.
I see you up there every night, I need you.

Where are you?

Your light can look so very cold.
Your distance is so very long.
On winter nights I want you here, be with me.

Where are you?

For years I dreamed that you'd be mine.
You just eluded me each time.
Wish I could be with you this time, just love me.

Where are you?

Sometimes it feels like you're near
I want you with me, not despair.
You're always unobtainable, I love you.

Where are you?
Where are you now?

Where are you?

You are unreachable to me.
I'm so lonely now
Where are you now?
Where are you now?
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