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Old 03-31-15, 04:31 PM   #1
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I don't want to see another sunrise,
I don't want to see another flower bloom.

I don't want to hear another bird sing,
I don't want to hear the pounding of the sea.

I don't want to feel the sand beneath my feet,
I don't want to feel the wind across my face.

I don't want to taste the saltiness of the sea,
I don't want to taste the tears that I shed.

I don't want to stop to smell the roses,
I don't want to stop to smell the ocean air.

But I will stop for "Mr. Death". I'll stop for him,
Cause I know that he cares. I have no desire to
Live anymore. I have no more energy, I have no
More will. I don't want to see the dawning of a new day.
I only want to see the darkness of a moonless & starless night.
I have no more energy to carry on... I have no more life to live.


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