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Old 02-08-2010, 01:11 AM   #1
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I wish that they had a section for happy poetry, but this section will have to do. I went for a walk in the woods today with my boyfriend and was instantly inspired to write this. It was cold, but with the sun shining it felt so nice and it was so beautiful. The poem explains it all.


I stand in peace with the sun shining on my face
I walk and observe everything around me at my own pace
The quiet and the subtle sounds drown out the turmoil of my mind
The beauty and the wonders of nature all around me I find
From the moss on the stones to the trees standing so tall
From the sweet blooms of spring to the soothing colors of fall
If I am still and quiet and just let myself be
Maybe some gentle animals wandering by will I see
From the birds to the deer; the woods teeming with life
I can watch at my leisure; my heart free from strife
With so much peace around me, my problems seem to disappear
With the love of my life by my side I have nothing to fear
I find a nice place to breathe and meditate
On things greater than myself I will contemplate
I will think on all that is good in this world and not on my pain
And what beauty there is to life and how much I have to gain
As the breeze blows though me, I can feel such love
For everything around me and the clear sky above
The snow on the ground that shows that no one else has been there
Except for the animals that have walked through without a care
So when life gets too hard and I can think of nothing that’s good
I know that I can always go into the woods
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Old 02-10-2010, 11:42 AM   #2
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U make me wanna go to the woods too lol... Such great imagery, love it

By the way I think creative writing is where most people post happy natured poetry, I just post all mine in depression poetry as it's usually all got a dark theme because the things that eat at me give me the words for my poetry, I suggested they just rename it poetry, sucks poetry gets so little feedback I reply to people occasionaly and always reply to others that reply to me, glad I saw this on unanswered posts so I could hit u back
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Old 02-10-2010, 12:39 PM   #3
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Thank you so much venom.
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Old 02-11-2010, 06:59 PM   #4
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WOAH! :D That's awesome!!!!!!!! I love it!
I can perfectly imagine it...
Venom's right, the imagery is amazing
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All I can say is that my life is pretty plain...
I like watchin' the puddles gather rain

I just want someone to say to me (oh, oh, oh, oh)
I'll always be there when you wake
You know I'd like to keep my cheeks dry today
So stay with me and I'll have it made

And I don't understand why I sleep all day
And I start to complain that there's no rain...
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Thank you so Much. Can I call you shudders? I think that sounds cute.
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Old 02-11-2010, 11:21 PM   #6
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:D Yeah, totally!
Laa? Ney?
Elby? (LB) Wait.... isn't that, like, a DVD cloner? xDDD I'm confuzz'd.
I looked up Lane in the dictionary to see what other definitions there were besides... you know, a road. And I found something awesome-- probably what you were originally aiming for, but I just discovered it! XD

Astronomy: a dark streak or band that shows up against a bright background, esp. in a spiral galaxy or emission nebula.

That's so amazing- like you! Interstellar Dust... ID? Like that part of your mind!!!! :D

Can I call you ID? Because you're spectacularly out of this world, as well as thoughtful? :DD or would it just be Id? XP
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All I can say is that my life is pretty plain...
I like watchin' the puddles gather rain

I just want someone to say to me (oh, oh, oh, oh)
I'll always be there when you wake
You know I'd like to keep my cheeks dry today
So stay with me and I'll have it made

And I don't understand why I sleep all day
And I start to complain that there's no rain...
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Old 02-12-2010, 10:54 PM   #7
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:D Yeah, totally!
Laa? Ney?
Elby? (LB) Wait.... isn't that, like, a DVD cloner? xDDD I'm confuzz'd.
I looked up Lane in the dictionary to see what other definitions there were besides... you know, a road. And I found something awesome-- probably what you were originally aiming for, but I just discovered it! XD

Astronomy: a dark streak or band that shows up against a bright background, esp. in a spiral galaxy or emission nebula.

That's so amazing- like you! Interstellar Dust... ID? Like that part of your mind!!!! :D

Can I call you ID? Because you're spectacularly out of this world, as well as thoughtful? :DD or would it just be Id? XP
Haha. ID? Id is something I have never been called in my life and I've been called a lot of things. Thanks shudders! I love it.

xoxo- Id
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