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Old 02-01-2010, 09:47 PM   #1
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Breaking



Shove me to the ground
Push me off the bridge
And I’ll hope I can stop

Punch me to darkness
Beat me to death
And I’ll hope I can survive

But why, can’t I –
say anything,
move at all,
scream out loud
at you


Why can’t I –
love everything,
give a damn
without being betrayed
by you


Let me know your there
Let me know you care
And we’ll see what happens in the end
Teach me how, I can find
what you took away that time
After it’s all passed by, I’ll learn why-
Why I am all alone

I know it’s partly my fault
But why can’t you think where you went wrong
Even after you’ve taken
everything from me

So this is where it ends
So this is what I get for -
all the time I’ve spent
I know that when I get closer,
I’ll fall and burn


Let me know your there
Let me know you care
And we’ll see what happens in the end
Teach me how, I can find
What you took away that time
After it’s all passed by, I’ll learn why-
Why I am all alone-
Teach me how, I can find
What you took away that time
After it’s all passed by, I’ll learn why-
Why I am all alone

Wasted on you and forgiveness
Take so many fragments of my skin
Getting closer to the way I think
Learning everything about myself
Stealing my thoughts so you can own me
Breaking my skull so you can control me

Let me know your there
Let me know you care
When it all ends
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Old 02-01-2010, 09:50 PM   #2
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If these are lyrics then I would love to hear the song. It was really beautiful.
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Old 02-01-2010, 09:52 PM   #3
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Thanks :] I wish i did know how to play music, then i could make it a song. But its only lyrics.
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Old 02-07-2010, 12:58 AM   #4
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nice stuff, i love it. write some more please
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Old 03-19-2010, 10:56 PM   #5
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these are great id love to hear it as a song, i am a musician myself and i already hear so many different ways it can be done and it gives me chills to think about... good job :D
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