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Old 04-20-15, 01:39 AM   #1
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Hello, I'm here to share with you guys and girls what i've written just about understanding and being in the same shoes as alot of people.

Life through the eyes and life through the brain is not the same
step into my mind where i can't take the pain, i'm a bruiser
And in my mind where i can't take the shame, of being a loser
sometimes i feel peace from the heavens above
cry myself to sleep but i realize there's more then one definition of love
use my mind to write so i guess my thought come in handy
Do nothing wrong but still these kids can't stand me
And no ones, because i keep my compose,
like Michael Corleone when he handles business for his family
In public i put my smile on and pretend that life is fine and dandy
never needed counselors, just someone who could understand me
And that feeling of pain of not being accepted
in the room, the only one that's feeling the same is my reflection
I held myself back from a change and i regret it
but you can't really come back from that first impression
i love you, but its hard for my words to express it
I just hope i can touch your heart and send you this message
Find something you love to do and use it to your advantage

Thoughts of suicide, consume ya mind, but your afraid
because you really don't want to die, just want to escape
I can help you find that source of ease that you haven't found yet
do something you love and use it as an outlet
I speak the truth i don't play round
keep yourself occupied, because an idle mind, is the Devil's playground
but the agony of depression and the pain of aggression
prevents a progression of trying to find a way for this pain to lesson
felt alone trapped like no ones actual there
but got the courage to go to my parents and now i know they actually care
And i know some parents would tell you to grow up and be a man
It's not your fault their not in the same frame of mind to understand
so turn to the people like you to lend a hand
see that's what i did and now no more nightmares im always dreamin
and i learned that my friends werent friends, just disguised demons

Suffered from this anxiety since age 3
i want to save you all because you all saved me
And i know against these people your helpless when you cry for help
their the reason why ya mind is hell
and the reason why, your forced to fight, the demon inside yourself
i understand because that's also me, so saving you is my only mission
i will talk if you want to talk, but i will also listen
because i know that feeling of pain when you start to believe all the hurtness
And the questions that spark in the brain, like am i the cause of burdens?
repetitive, every visions the same, on a boat as i recede from the surface
feelin worthless, getting ready to dive head first
but realize that the point of life is livin and my decision defeats the whole purpose
So go on through your days and just know that you are perfect.
and this is a message from me to you, i hope that you've heard this

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I hope some one can relate to this piece. If i can make someone feel better, it would mean the world to me. I hope i can help you. I love you <3. - drewfc

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Old 04-20-15, 09:16 AM   #2
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I can relate to this, and i find there's so much wisdom in your words, thank you for posting this :)
I hope this becomes a song with music etc one day, it's so much better and meaningful than many tunes out there only talking about hatred, anger, despair, how dark and evil the world is and never providing a solution to anything. Well done my friend ! :)
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I can relate to this, and i find there's so much wisdom in your words, thank you for posting this :)
I hope this becomes a song with music etc one day, it's so much better and meaningful than many tunes out there only talking about hatred, anger, despair, how dark and evil the world is and never providing a solution to anything. Well done my friend ! :)
Ah, Thanks man. It's the dream one day :). It was a goal of mine to achieve, i was never bullied alot, however other events in my life gave me that same mind set, which i use to write about, taking my situation and telling people how i can use it as a positive thing in life to maybe help someone else do the same. It is all i ever wanted, was to help people that feel like they have no one. The amount of people i could actually seriously help just by understanding them. that goes for everyone to. im tired of seeing people die.

my dream is to help struggling people.
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In public i put my smile on and pretend that life is fine and dandy
never needed counselors, just someone who could understand me
And that feeling of pain of not being accepted
in the room, the only one that's feeling the same is my reflection
I held myself back from a change and i regret it
but you can't really come back from that first impression
i love you, but its hard for my words to express it
I just hope i can touch your heart and send you this message
Find something you love to do and use it to your advantage
Thank you for these words
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Thank you for these words

No problem, It's what i love to do. Hope i helped you a bit.
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Ah, Thanks man. It's the dream one day :). It was a goal of mine to achieve, i was never bullied alot, however other events in my life gave me that same mind set, which i use to write about, taking my situation and telling people how i can use it as a positive thing in life to maybe help someone else do the same. It is all i ever wanted, was to help people that feel like they have no one. The amount of people i could actually seriously help just by understanding them. that goes for everyone to. im tired of seeing people die.

my dream is to help struggling people.
The important thing is you try, friend. You care and you do something about it. So many don't give a damn, and even less complete their thoughts about helping people with actions. The fact you do both means a lot, you set an example and this is beautiful. Keep spreading light around, this world is in dire need of it :)
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The important thing is you try, friend. You care and you do something about it. So many don't give a damn, and even less complete their thoughts about helping people with actions. The fact you do both means a lot, you set an example and this is beautiful. Keep spreading light around, this world is in dire need of it :)
I promise. I promise to do all i can to let people know that no matter what we are, no matter who we are, we are all human. No one should be treated differently. I have always had of love for people, no matter what they have said to me that was negative. I use it to fuel my writing. One day, i will let this world know, One day, we will all have a voice.
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I promise. I promise to do all i can to let people know that no matter what we are, no matter who we are, we are all human. No one should be treated differently. I have always had of love for people, no matter what they have said to me that was negative. I use it to fuel my writing. One day, i will let this world know, One day, we will all have a voice.
Don't forget free will. Everyone should be free to choose their path in life, just like you do. Yes we are all human, but many choose to be beasts, or unfeeling automatons. If they don't want to change and evolve it's not your fault and it doesn't mean you didn't try really hard.
Just put your message across, release it on the wind and let it go where it may and touch those willing to accept it. It's a beautiful message indeed, and a very good method/defence to teach to people, to use insults or attackes to fuel creativeness and art. This is very important i believe, to transmute aggression to something ebautiful and useful, not answer strife with warfare as it only creates more negativity inside us. Instead, we can stop looking at the Abyss and turn our gaze towards the light. I truly wish you make all your dreams come true my friend :)
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Don't forget free will. Everyone should be free to choose their path in life, just like you do. Yes we are all human, but many choose to be beasts, or unfeeling automatons. If they don't want to change and evolve it's not your fault and it doesn't mean you didn't try really hard.
Just put your message across, release it on the wind and let it go where it may and touch those willing to accept it. It's a beautiful message indeed, and a very good method/defence to teach to people, to use insults or attackes to fuel creativeness and art. This is very important i believe, to transmute aggression to something ebautiful and useful, not answer strife with warfare as it only creates more negativity inside us. Instead, we can stop looking at the Abyss and turn our gaze towards the light. I truly wish you make all your dreams come true my friend :)
That's exactly what i try to portray in all my works. To take negativity and use it as a strength in hopes of maybe helping others do the same
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