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Old 08-10-15, 07:17 AM   #1
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As children we all played together
At first we ostracize the youngest
For he cried at all the pointless things
But became one of us at a later time
The eldest was the leader of the pack
Tall and wise
We did all she told us
Till I got hurt
I fell from the mountain of chairs we all piled up
She backed downed as our ring leader
I took her place without realizing it
Soon, I called the shots and made the rules
The chubby one was easily jealous
He fought for the top but wasn't worthy
As the eldest out grown us
She became a lone wolf
Time and time again to see us
The chubby one left
and became a menace to the adults
The youngest became like the eldest
but seek a different group to lurk in
I was torn into 3
I adored the eldest
I cared for the chubby one
I looked out for the youngest one
and soon I realized I was broken into 4 pieces
That weren't meant to fit
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<3 Really beautiful and honest.
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