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Old 07-22-15, 02:29 AM   #1
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Stones keep dragging us down
By the neck they pull
Lungs collapsing
No air to breath
We're at the bottom of the sea

Stones grow bigger
With words and pain
Crawling up is no option
Sinking further down
The only way.



My poems overuse metaphors and have no rhyme. They just tell a hidden story about me and my inner feelings.

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Old 07-26-15, 04:56 AM   #2
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I feel similar to this. It's like quicksand. The more I struggle, the further I sink. I always feel like I'm being pulled down. But, in a way, I don't want to get out in case I'm knocked back again.

I think the further up someone goes, the bigger the rocks they use to knock you down. At least if I stay down, I'm already on the ground. They still throw rocks, but at least I miss the fall.
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