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Old 07-19-15, 06:39 PM   #1
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so little hope,
lets tell the pope,
feel so sad,
its so bad.
keep feeling shame,
thats so lame
what a shame
some days i do okay,
and i think i'll stay,
then my mood changes,
in different ranges,
and i get so fed up and i cant cope,
and at those times there's no hope,
because i can't cope,
and i have my limits,
so if everything's shit
im sorry but ill just go,
or at least think that,
untill i feel better again.



yehh... that last few lines didnt rhyme. sozzies guys im not poet

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Old 07-21-15, 06:31 PM   #2
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1)

Feel kinda guilty,
but don't want no pity,
it was meant to be good news
but he was blue,
said he was worried,
and i was afraid he would scurry .
But he said it was fine,
he'll always be there
YAY HE'S MINE!!


......as friends DUH
Uh huh


2)
She told me he likes me,
wow that really surprised me,
4 weeks have passed,
he still hasn't asked.
Guess its hard since he's away,
he's always at bay
Feel kind of sad,
but it's not too bad.
I'll find someone else,
and look after myself

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Old 07-22-15, 11:23 AM   #3
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Hallo! . This is about the time i met my counsellor for the first time yesterday in a big dark room on top of a building

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Oi that room was dark,
'What's up with this lark?',
It scared me a bit,
see it was barely lit,
dim light that came from sun,
oh god did i want to run,
he also looked weird,
pointy face and a small beard ,
but it wasn't really that,
i just wanted to scatt,
must have been everything together,
also i was at the end of my tether,
anxiety filled day,
that i couldn't keep away
now im just scared,
but next time ill be prepared,
got a friend,
who can meet me at the end,
and if anything happens,
I'll just pretend I know karate.


ok this one was so random..... lol the last sentence i wasnt even bothered rhyming.

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Old 07-22-15, 06:28 PM   #4
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It seems so logical,
it's really not irrational!
I'm not depressed,
I just need a rest,
everything's so fast,
i surely can't last?

Please give me a break,
for god's sake,
Feeling so desperate
and really so restless,
my brother don't want me,
and maybe i should leave him be,

I'm really too difficult,
but it's getting so critical,
no one to help me, no one to turn to,
I really can't figure out all these rules.
I guess he thought I'd be fine if he left,
but really I've just been getting more possessed.
He likes his new life,

And me

I just need a knife.


Just kidding.
I just need to improve my life.


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Old 07-24-15, 11:18 AM   #5
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She's so suspicious,
It's actually quite conspicious.
She doesn't trust me,
oh what could it beeeeeee.

Getting so worried
and everything's so blurry.
Barely see straight,
it's like a figure of eight,
keep losing my faith.

Still do the self - help shit though,
but progress is slow :(
too much stress, too much pressure,
will i ever ever get better?
It's all too overpowering,
Lads that's hardly empowering.

How long can I last,
.......and put this all in the past?

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