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Old 10-04-12, 08:04 AM   #1
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I AM TIRED

I opened my eyes and it's another day.
Not another trial of my life I prayed.
Although I prayed, it is still no use.
I felt so cold, lonely and abused.
It's another challenge of life.
Like an unstoppable nagging wife.
I see others are progressing.
But my life is very depressing.
I see others found their mate.
That's a sight I really hate.
I am tired. I am tired. Please let me sleep.
Enough! ENOUGH! come bury me deep...

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Old 10-04-12, 08:29 AM   #2
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Sorry if my poem sucks.
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Old 10-06-12, 04:14 AM   #3
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Your poem is fun and easy to follow because it all rhymes! (Tho I used to think the end of the word had to rhyme or else it didn't rhyme, but realizing you can rhyme the middle of the word and that'd be enough has opened more doors for me to different poems and songs.)
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it doesnt suck i love it it touches me
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