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Old 09-01-16, 07:48 AM   #1
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a single tree sits by a stream,
surrounded by a field of gold/
the stream trickles along towards,
a place that's still unknown/

a light wind flows over my body,
as i lie within the field untold/
my heart beat slows,
as my contentment grows,
for in my grasp is peace i hold/

even as i close my eyes,
a city in the distance glows/
with hope so bright,
it lights up the skies,
here, darkness has no home/

there is no sun, nor there a moon/
yet my eyes gaze at the eternal; of,
this field of dreams that soothes/
stretching out into celestial bodies

is this heaven or just my mind?
is this where i am to find;
a solace that even calms time?
a place made where souls reside;
where hopes and dreams may intertwine

i pray for all to see this place,
as words could never describe/
the beauty of this lands embrace,
this land where heaven resides/

T'is a vision for those who hide/
from the chaos of this reality//
a land that births sweet serenity//
where the sleepless can finally lie/
where the meager may find sanctuary//
and all desperation will subside/
if you could only see what i see
if you could only see through these eyes...

in memory of komotion
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Old 09-05-16, 06:04 AM   #2
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Beautiful poem, I enjoyed it very much.
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