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Old 08-26-16, 12:27 AM   #1
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I can't sleep. Here's a song I've been working on:

Seethin' from this legion of demons I play host to/
When you're dead inside people just ghost you/
Or at least most do/
I did what I'm supposed to/
Still never be enough/
Til' your only decision left is who gets to keep your stuff/
Guards raised, mastered the art of cactus/
Those with big hearts make easier target practice/
Devil bringin' the blitz with nobody on that hot route/
You can call it tough love, we both know it's a fucking cop out/
I walked into the hospital like I came for help/
All my best jokes are aimed at myself/
Remember me as nothing more than a rude creep/
I could hang myself with her sheets and she wouldn't lose sleep/
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Old 09-16-16, 12:12 AM   #2
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i like it
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Old 11-23-16, 03:17 PM   #3
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You made it rhyme well done
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