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Old 08-31-10, 02:10 AM   #1
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Comin out a coma and they say I'm still alive
I can't believe I made it cause I used a .45
I'm sittin here miserable wondering how I'll pay these bills
When I get another idea, one that really kills

Comin out a coma and they say I'm still alive
They scraped me off the pavement from a 50 foot dive
I wonder why I'm doing this it's just a failure cycle
Now I'm sittin here again, wondering "what will I do?"
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Old 08-31-10, 02:32 AM   #2
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....... that vicious cycle........sigh...

still...great poem; heartfelt and just totally YOU ........
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Old 08-31-10, 08:33 PM   #3
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yes... what a cycle it is...
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Old 09-10-10, 03:15 AM   #4
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very true.
another great poem by you.
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