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Old 03-19-16, 01:38 PM   #1
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It aches
My chest aches as time goes on
It stops yet it returns
sometimes worse sometimes not that bad
but most time
It hurts so much
that I need to lay down
I count a bit
I turn around
I think of happy thoughts
but it's still here
It hurts more by the second
I don't know how to deal with it
I'm scared
I'm lonely
I just want to sleep in peace
Goodnight
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Old 03-20-16, 05:53 PM   #2
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That's a very good poem, PenguinLord. I'm sorry it came out of such a difficult place though
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Old 04-26-16, 09:38 AM   #3
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thank you :)
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Nice poem, I feel just the same as you :(
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Old 05-01-16, 07:52 AM   #5
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Hope you get through your problems, and even if they return. Let's keep up with a smile on our face :)

we don't need to succumb to such negative feelings, but I know it's hard and it feels impossible... trying, or just hanging on is sometimes enough to get through something we're dealing...

ahaha sorry for the ramble
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